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New FIRE SRAYER in action!

I don't quite understand what you mean but this is probably the best quality I can do atm with my current setup (there is quite a decent difference from this commentary and one of the earlier ones).
I see 2 ways improve the voice commentary:
1. Get a better microphone.
2. Better articulate the sentences as in put bigger pressure on certain vowels to make the speech more interesting to listen. I lack this when speak english because I have little to none rl english speaking experience. I recon it should improve on its own over time.

I use a 3$ microphone... don't expect it to do a God's work ok?
I already have tried multiple settings and ways of speaking and so far this is the optimal one. You can easily tell that by comparing to one of my earlier videos.

quote: a 3$ microphone... don't expect it to do a God's work

On the first day God said, "Let there be light!" -- but his 3$ mic garbled up the command and a grimdark universe got spawned instead.