I think the content might be closer to a main title like "How to Raid and Why You Always Should".
I think the article is pretty good. Converting existing first-utterance-of-paragraph things to proper more visible subsection titles would make this better. Some could be added, for example put a subsection title here:
Raiding while being raided
Just In Time defences. If you are scouting properly and have frontline radars up, it will in most situations give a builder on high priority enough time to build a Lotus turret before the enemy arrives. In combination with a few mobile units of your own, this is one of the most lean and adaptive ways to counter heavy raiding while still expanding.
and then Conclusion before the last bit.