it ended like 1 minute in tbh bc other guy's build order got them killed by opening raider
but experience is experience
i didn't watch my income enough and eventually i overcapped metal from all the free expansion
my attacks were sloppy, losing raiders against defenses they had no reason to try to fight. opening scorcher didn't need to die. it already got the scouting

nice to keep units close for pressure
I needed to build caretaker earlier.
very short game so I'm not sure what else is there to say for broad feedback.