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[Souls wanted] Help make the Release Trailer!

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3/20/2017 9:21:39 PMILrankAdminhokomoko before revert after revert
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1 I'll start by saying the the video is stunning, however, I have some critical issues with its planned use. 1 I'll start by saying the the video is stunning, however, I have some critical issues with its planned use.
2 1) No obvious goals - Is it supposed to complement the current trailer? To replace it? 2 1) No clearly stated goals - Is it supposed to complement the current trailer? To replace it?
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4 2) It is too long. Trailers that are the first interaction of a potential player with ZK have to be 1:00 - 1:30 long. 30 seconds before showing anything ingame or exploding is way too much. 4 2) It is too long. Trailers that are the first interaction of a potential player with ZK have to be 1:00 - 1:30 long. 30 seconds before showing anything ingame or exploding is way too much.
5 This leads me to the next point. 5 This leads me to the next point.
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7 3) You have to start with action or with something that resembles it, you have a single digit number of seconds to grab a watcher's attention. While we know what Zenith is, no one else does and curiosity doesn't exist unless it's artificially produced (may be difficult to do that in 5 seconds). Remember that explosions are universally understood. 7 3) You have to start with action or with something that resembles it, you have a single digit number of seconds to grab a watcher's attention. While we know what Zenith is, no one else does and curiosity doesn't exist unless it's artificially produced (may be difficult to do that in 5 seconds). Remember that explosions are universally understood.
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9 4) Forget that it's difficult to see that the zenith moves the moon, even if it was clear it puts us in a very big problem: Comparison with PA. 9 4) Forget that it's difficult to see that the zenith moves the moon, even if it was clear it puts us in a very big problem: Comparison with PA.
10 We don't want to be compared to PA in any way. If people think you can crash moons into stuff in ZK due to the trailer and ZK doesn't deliver? terrible! If people say: "it's a PA clone!"? maybe even worse. We may be able to live with: "this is how PA should have been", but that's also bad. 10 We don't want to be compared to PA in any way. If people think you can crash moons into stuff in ZK due to the trailer and ZK doesn't deliver? terrible! If people say: "it's a PA clone!"? maybe even worse. We may be able to live with: "this is how PA should have been", but that's also bad.
11 Starlight may be preferable, or if you can think of a way to show Zenith doing what it does ingame without implying any remote association to PA. 11 Starlight may be preferable, or if you can think of a way to show Zenith doing what it does ingame without implying any remote association to PA.