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10/10/2017 2:50:54 PMMYrankAdminKingRaptor before revert after revert
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3 [i]"real-world physics"[/i] sounds like an exaggeration (a lot of it isn't realistic), "simulated" perhaps? 3 [i]"real-world physics"[/i] sounds like an exaggeration (a lot of it isn't realistic), "simulated" perhaps?
4 ( same deal with "realistic explosions" 4 ( same deal with "realistic explosions")
5 \n 5 \n
6 [quote]Tactical possibilities aren't limited by one's technical ability[/quote] 6 [quote]Tactical possibilities aren't limited by one's technical ability[/quote]
7 Probably because of my programming hobby, but "technical" here sounds more like "skill with computer code and other such things" than "APM" 7 Probably because of my programming hobby, but "technical" here sounds more like "skill with computer code and other such things" than "APM"
8 Maybe "dexterity?" 8 Maybe "dexterity?"
9 \n 9 \n
10 (because I'm that kind of person, I tried and failed to come up with phrasing that doesn't imply having things like muscle spasms or blindness won't impact the game at all) 10 (because I'm that kind of person, I tried and failed to come up with phrasing that doesn't imply having things like muscle spasms or blindness won't impact the game at all)
11 \n 11 \n
12 Some minor stuff: 12 Some minor stuff:
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14 [quote]A powerful interface allows players to easily implement their economic, strategic, and tactical decisions[/quote] 14 [quote]A powerful interface allows players to easily implement their economic, strategic, and tactical decisions[/quote]
15 "execute" would probably be more correct than "implement" 15 "execute" would probably be more correct than "implement"
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17 [i]"Spider walkers"[/i] should be just "Spiders" perhaps 17 [i]"Spider walkers"[/i] should be just "Spiders" perhaps
18 (also maybe remove Tanks, since to people outside the context of the game it just sounds like a subset of Vehicles) 18 (also maybe remove Tanks, since to people outside the context of the game it just sounds like a subset of Vehicles)