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@GoogleFrog while I feel your rewrite has completely correct information, you've fallen back to just writing a summarized newbie guide. The purpose of the page is to really contrast the differences between ZK and Starcraft in quick one-liners so that people have a point of reference. It should just be short read of "quick facts" like
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@GoogleFrog while I feel your rewrite has completely correct information, you've fallen back to just writing a summarized newbie guide. The purpose of the page is to really contrast the differences between ZK and Starcraft in quick one-liners so that people have a point of reference. It should just be short read of "quick facts" like
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In Starcraft you can select only 12 units, in ZK you can select as many you want.
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In Starcraft you can select only 12 units, in ZK you can select as many you want.
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The reason it needs to be short is there are many players who will not read newbie guides because they are too long. I read and love them, but many people won't, or simply can't because they don't have time (maybe they have only 30 minutes and are in the middle of a broadcasting a streaming video?). So something really short and quick would be better than nothing at all.
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In Starcraft your units stop to attack, in ZK nearly all of them can fire while moving.
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In Starcraft your units stop to attack, in ZK nearly all of them can fire while moving.
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and so on. Make it really basic and list-like.
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and so on. Make it really basic and list-like.
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At the very least, start out with my quick list and then your existing summary of how to play can follow it once the players have now formed the contrast in their minds of the two games.
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At the very least, start out with my quick list and then your existing summary of how to play can follow it once the players have now formed the contrast in their minds of the two games.
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The reason it needs to be short is there are many players who will not read newbie guides because they are too long. I read and love them, but many people won't, or simply can't because they don't have time (maybe they have only 30 minutes and are in the middle of a broadcasting a streaming video?). So something really short and quick would be better than nothing at all.
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