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            @Berder - Watching that game, a few comments.  
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            @Berder - Watching that game, a few comments.  
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            1) Building two lotuses next to your factory at the start like that is a little heavy on the defense and you would normally be better off expanding faster instead.  Try to build extractors before building defenses and keep your constructors safe with your mobile units.
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            1) Building two lotuses next to your factory at the start like that is a little heavy on the defense and you would normally be better off expanding faster instead.  Try to build extractors before building defenses and keep your constructors safe with your mobile units.
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            2)
             
            Early 
            game 
            vs 
            the 
            scorchers,
             
            your 
            life 
            would 
            be 
            a 
            lot 
            easier 
            if 
            you 
            had 
            one 
            Bolas 
            with 
            your 
            Daggers.
             
             
            Bolas 
            will 
            slow 
            the 
            scorchers 
            and 
            reduce 
            their 
            dps 
            allowing 
            Daggers 
            to 
            kill 
            them 
            more 
            easily.
             
             
            Daggers 
            are 
            hit 
            and 
            run 
            units,
             
            they 
            take 
            a 
            while 
            to 
            reload 
            so 
            you 
            should 
            back 
            them 
            away 
            from 
            other 
            raiders 
            like 
            Scorchers 
            when 
            trying 
            to 
            kill 
            them.
             
             
            You 
            had 
            good 
            results 
            with 
            the 
            early 
            Scalpel 
            play,
             
            keep 
            that 
            up.
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            2)
             
            Early 
            game 
            vs 
            the 
            scorchers,
             
            your 
            life 
            would 
            be 
            a 
            lot 
            easier 
            if 
            you 
            had 
            one 
            Bolas 
            with 
            your 
            Daggers.
             
             
            Bolas 
            will 
            slow 
            the 
            scorchers 
            and 
            reduce 
            their 
            dps 
            allowing 
            Daggers 
            to 
            kill 
            them 
            more 
            easily.
             
             
            Daggers 
            are 
            hit 
            and 
            run 
            units,
             
            they 
            take 
            a 
            while 
            to 
            reload 
            so 
            you 
            should 
            back 
            them 
            away 
            from 
            other 
            raiders 
            like 
            Scorchers 
            in 
            between 
            shots 
            when 
            trying 
            to 
            kill 
            them.
             
             
            You 
            had 
            good 
            results 
            with 
            the 
            early 
            Scalpel 
            play,
             
            keep 
            that 
            up.
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            3) Pointing back to point 1, your expansion is really slow.  A big problem you're having is that your enemy is out-expanding you, even though you're winning the attrition war and disco3llt3 is spending most of their metal on just building defenses, which if you scouted you could destroy before they're finished.
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            3) Pointing back to point 1, your expansion is really slow.  A big problem you're having is that your enemy is out-expanding you, even though you're winning the attrition war and disco3llt3 is spending most of their metal on just building defenses, which if you scouted you could destroy before they're finished.
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            4) Use daggers more for scouting, disco3llt3 had a bunch of undefended expansions you could have raided that would have slowed them down significantly if the expansions were shut down.
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            4) Use daggers more for scouting, disco3llt3 had a bunch of undefended expansions you could have raided that would have slowed them down significantly if the expansions were shut down.
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            5) The halberd + scalpel group that ran into the first stardust were working pretty well.  If you had waited for the scalpel missiles to be off of cooldown before attacking the halberds would have been able to clean up the stardust without losing any of their number and then you probably can kill the commander there and maybe transition that into winning the game.  Three scalpels will straight up one shot a stardust for future reference.
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            5) The halberd + scalpel group that ran into the first stardust were working pretty well.  If you had waited for the scalpel missiles to be off of cooldown before attacking the halberds would have been able to clean up the stardust without losing any of their number and then you probably can kill the commander there and maybe transition that into winning the game.  Three scalpels will straight up one shot a stardust for future reference.
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            6) The two halberds plus 3 scalpels group was extremely successful in killing badgers, pretty much took no damage while hunting them down and killing them.  Later, at about 8:45, you are right next to disco3llt3's base with both the base and the caretakers naked, while all disco3llt3  has are two badgers and their commander.  You get scared off when you notice the stardust but you could have easily taken out both caretakers without losing anything by just staying in the north side of the base, and probably even the factory as well.
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            6) The two halberds plus 3 scalpels group was extremely successful in killing badgers, pretty much took no damage while hunting them down and killing them.  Later, at about 8:45, you are right next to disco3llt3's base with both the base and the caretakers naked, while all disco3llt3  has are two badgers and their commander.  You get scared off when you notice the stardust but you could have easily taken out both caretakers without losing anything by just staying in the north side of the base, and probably even the factory as well.
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            7) It would have been a good idea to build a caretaker a little earlier as you did excess 600ish metal, you probably wanted it around the 4 minute mark.
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            7) It would have been a good idea to build a caretaker a little earlier as you did excess 600ish metal, you probably wanted it around the 4 minute mark.
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            8) Taking out the stinger + faraday position was actually fairly efficient, good job.  You should have waited to kill the stardust in the west until your lance was off cooldown though and take it off fire at will to ensure you can kill the stardust with it :)  If you *have* to fight a stardust with halberds, spread them out with right click and drag a line around the stardust so that the shots don't hit all of them at once.  If, say, you draw a circle around the stardust while holding down right click your halberds will encircle it and only one can be hit at a time.
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            8) Taking out the stinger + faraday position was actually fairly efficient, good job.  You should have waited to kill the stardust in the west until your lance was off cooldown though and take it off fire at will to ensure you can kill the stardust with it :)  If you *have* to fight a stardust with halberds, spread them out with right click and drag a line around the stardust so that the shots don't hit all of them at once.  If, say, you draw a circle around the stardust while holding down right click your halberds will encircle it and only one can be hit at a time.
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            9) You had another chance to take out the enemy base with the halberd group you forgot about on his island :(
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            9) You had another chance to take out the enemy base with the halberd group you forgot about on his island :(
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            10) If you had stuck to just 1-2 likhos they would have worked, but you built too many and neglected building ground units.  If they had stuck to taking out the enemy defenses you could have just kept spamming halberds and won.  Otherwise halberd spam was working but you needed to keep scalpels around to burst the stardusts down, spread your halberds better, or lance the defenses down better.  Or all of the above :)
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            10) If you had stuck to just 1-2 likhos they would have worked, but you built too many and neglected building ground units.  If they had stuck to taking out the enemy defenses you could have just kept spamming halberds and won.  Otherwise halberd spam was working but you needed to keep scalpels around to burst the stardusts down, spread your halberds better, or lance the defenses down better.  Or all of the above :)
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            I hope my quick and dirty analysis of your game helps!
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            I hope my quick and dirty analysis of your game helps!
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